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  • Essay / Khaled Case Study - 1144

    Looking at the feedback your workshop partners gave you over the semester, summarize the type of feedback they gave you (such as clarity, main idea, the organization). If you would also like to include comments discussed in person, you can do so. • I received many interesting comments this semester from my classmates. This feedback mainly concerned the organization of my essay. For example, they suggested that I move some of my sentences to another place in order to improve them in terms of persuasiveness.2. What type of feedback was most useful to you in making revisions to your next versions? • Personally, feedback focused on organization was the most useful. This is because sometimes I wrote certain sentences in the wrong place, which made my essay difficult to read. Therefore, with their help, I was able to notice these errors and significantly improve my essay. 3. Is there any type of feedback that you have not typically considered in your post-workshop revisions? Why?• Ultimately, all of this feedback I received was extremely helpful in writing more persuasive and better essays. So, I took into account all the feedback I received in order to improve my tests. Additionally, I am very grateful to my classmates for giving me honest feedback throughout the course.