Project 4 Reflection1/4. My strength is explaining the causes of the problem to my audience, your comment "Your draft leads pretty well to your solution." Indicate this. I have some obvious weaknesses. First of all the following comment “However, some details are missing for the solution. I've written some notes in the margins to show you where to consider adding more details. Your discussion ends as you arrive at your main idea about how to educate young people. Indicates that even if I am successful in explaining the causes of the problem to my audience, I need to be more specific in the details of the solution. Second, although I showed improvement in previous projects with my use of passive verbs/phrases, I regressed with project four, your comment "I inserted some sentence-level notes to show you what work for the sentences. You will see that I encourage you to write active sentences that include subjects. Indicate this. Honestly, I got a little lazy with the final project and it shows.2. Due to the delay in writing the fourth draft of my project, I was not assigned a partner. However, I asked my roommate to take a look. He agreed that I needed to include more details in my solution section. Specifically, he pointed out that the following section of the passage “Although the causes of low youth voter turnout are both regional and national, they can be addressed at the local level. There are two main paths to addressing low youth turnout: compulsory voting and community outreach. This was unnecessary as I mention it in both the mandatory voting and community outreach sections. I agree with him and deleted him.3. The feedback from my CTL tutors was very helpful. She pointed out a very useful change I could make. She suggested that, middle of paper, we can help educate young people about the electoral and voter registration processes. For example, we can intervene in youth groups and university clubs, the main principles of these organizations usually involve learning new things. Simple, inexpensive leaflets disseminate information to the public. and voter registration processes. For example, volunteers may speak to youth groups and college clubs. The main goals of these organizations usually involve learning new things. Simple, inexpensive leaflets disseminate information to the public and volunteers can distribute them in their communities. “These three revisions will make draft four much clearer to my target audience..