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  • Essay / trying to be a strong story - 757

    “Yes, it's my birthday, I'm finally 17! » Austin shouted as he got out of bed. Soon he would be an adult. After his family wished him a happy birthday and gave him breakfast, Austin said goodbye to his father Bill, his mother Kelly, Jake who was only 12 months old, Samantha who is 12 years old and n He didn't have a good relationship with Austin who was always fighting, Peter who is eight years old and who was happy all the time, always laughing. And finally Lezzy who was a little angel. She is two years old and loves her family. Kelly had gone to work and so had Bill. The babysitter stayed home with Jake and Lizzy. Austin had gone to school with Sam and Peter. Loudly at 3:00 p.m., the bell rang. Everyone missed school. At home, Bill was waiting for the children. “Your mother comes home early around 5 p.m. She's going to bring cake and pizza. Bill exclaimed “Yes!” Sam and Peter shouted, “Grandma and Grandpa are coming, so tidy up a bit.” » It was almost 5:30 p.m. and Kelly had not arrived. Everyone was sitting around talking while waiting. “I’ll call him.” Austin remarked "Good idea" I thought GrandmaAustine had called three times and no answer. He walked over to his father and told him that his mother hadn't responded. “Well, maybe she’s driving.” Bill thought. That's when the phone rang. Sammy ran to the phone. “Is that Bill Franks?” “No seconds” asked the caller. Sam runs to find his father. Sam ran to the kitchen to give the phone to his father. Bill went into a room with Austin by his side to talk on the phone. Grijalva 2 “Yes, that’s him,” Bill replied. Unable to hear anything, Austine looked at her father with her dark blue eyes. Suddenly, Bill dropped the phone and a tear fell into the middle of a paper... somewhere else, except Austin. The wedding would take place in three months. Finally, it was time for the wedding to be beautiful. The bride walked down the aisle. She said the word “yes”. But before Bill could say it, Austin shouted, “No daddies please!!!! » Austin rubbed his blue eyes and tried to calm them from the cascade of tears. He had stopped the marriage. His father came running and comforted his son. “The wedding will not take place today. » Austin was shocked by his father's worlds. Had his father done this for him? Or was he not sure either? Was he happy the wedding wasn't happening? The family was relieved that the wedding would not take place. They needed more time. No more time to spend together, no more time to think, their mother had just died. They needed more time to understand and love each other.